Gold on the Forest Floor
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Two girls, two poems, in color. Companion words. Little One's came first, inspired Eldest Child's...
Gold
The color gold shining on leaves
swiftly floating everywhere like a
sparkling fog. Hear, the music
starts to play, announcing the
arrival of the color gold.
Forest
The color gold,
shining on leaves,
dappling the
forest floor
with sparkles.
Oh, and I wanted to add this one, a color poem that spontaneously appeared at the dinner table. And this reminds me of Laura's comment over at High Calling Blogs. Yes, part of finding poetry is finding a new way of hearing...
Discriminating
She neatly
picks out
all the peas
and puts them
in a little
green pile.
Labels: children's writing, High Calling Blogs, Random Acts of Poetry
2 Comments:
you must marvel at your daughters.
a // sparkling fog ... announcing the // arrival of the color gold
... and how could i not love a poem with the words dappling and sparkles.
Wonderful images, sounds. Too good to be kept to oneself; I'm glad the ladies were willing to share!
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